Cool, but...
Cool piece, but too repetetive. Even without major melodic/chordal changes, this one could have benefited hugely from variations in orchestration. It could work well cinematically, but to double as straight-up listening material it needs a bit of work. I just feel like there is a lot more potential within the already existent song structure - more that could be done within the boundaries, so to speak.
Still a good piece though, keep it up - the more classical/orchestral artists, the better! Oh, and would I be correct in guessing the use of Edirol Orchestral?
-N